The morning ride
In the morning horses ride side by side
They know there out for there morning ride
The dew will shimmer on the glass
The sun will rise and begin its pass
The air is fresh and crisp and clean
You have to know the feel to get what I mean
We climb the rough ‘n’ rocky hill
And in the forest all is still
Two bays and three greys canter in time
As we make our way through the pine
Jesters smooth trot
And eyesores canter
They seem to have a breath taking stride
Oh what a glorious morning ride
One
I climb on his back, coat a glissnen
And then I sit up high and listen
I hear the magpie’s feeble cry
My horse gives a sigh
I give a nudge with my polished boots
“Walk on” I say with a voice that suits
And gladly does my horse do so
Then move on up to a trot of high and low
The horse seems to sense seems to know
That I am more that willing to GO GO GO!
We make a canter
Then I realise
This time I see
The horse and I r1
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Tags: Boots, Canter, Feeble Cry, Glorious Morning, Horse Poems, Horses, Magpie, N Rocky Hill, Shimmer, Sit, Smooth Trot, Suits, Sun, Two Bays
aw i like the second one best but both are very nice and i got excited thinking about being out under the sun on my horses back looking at the beautiful sky! *sigh* =)
there both good but the morning ride was my favorite.
the first one is the better one . GREAT! job!
keep it up!
i like the first one the most. in the first line change ‘ride’ to a different word since you use it again in the next line. lines 3 & 4 are future tense but then the next lines are present. didnt care for line 6. good though.
the second one is ok. change line 9 into two separate lines, “the horse seems to sense” “he seems to know”. the last line is kinda corny.
Hey! I have to say
you wrote some good poems today.